留学生英语论文篇幅太多时，能够如何删减篇幅?除开通过融合语句以外，是不是也有别的方式?

形容词优先选择(防止专有名词化)

先看一下下列范例:

We should take into consideration several factors.

He must make a decision about what to do.

They gave us information about the new research program.

上边语句在语法上是完全的正确，但由于不立即应用形容词而挑选该形容词的专有名词型而造成篇幅变多且不足立即与简约。

We should take into consideration several factors.[七个字]

He must make a decision about what to do.[9个字]

They gave us information about the new research program.[9个字]

鲜红色一部分便是专有名词化，我们可以将这些立即用一个形容词更换，提议创作时多留意句式。

We should consider several factors.[五个字]

He must decide about what to do.[七个字]

They informed us about the new research program.[八个字]

形容词专有名词化也有另一个缺陷便是非常容易写成被动语态构造：

×The analysis of how X-factor impacts B gene expression was conducted.[11个字]

√We analyzed X-factor’s impact on B gene expression.[八个字]

运用把专有名词化转为一个形容词，轻松把语句转成主动语态并取得成功减缩篇幅。

假如你搜索普遍的形容词专有名词化，能够发觉一个方式。形容词应用好像“make”和“take”，动名词(verb ing)，或专有名词由-tion，-sion，-ment，-ence，和-ance末尾的，很高概率都是有一个相对性应形容词，因此如果你在修改英文时，运用找寻作用找到这种末尾和形容词后调整就可以了。

何时该改动形容词专有名词化?

有时形容词专有名词化确实是务必或没法防止的，但现阶段我们都是过多应用了。下边小编列举了一些普遍的应调整专有名词化的状况：

1，无意义形容词形容词专有名词形:删掉无意义的，将形容词专有名词形变换为关键形容词。

Joe will conduct research on the impact of the recent drought on local wildlife.→Joe will research the recent drought’s impact on local wildlife.

The board will make a decision next week about whether to accept you next week.→The board will decide next week whether to accept you.

2，当形容词专有名词形是被动语态构造的主关键词时：找到真实的主关键词，并将形容词专有名词形变换为该主题风格的形容词。

The approval of the plan was given by the committee yesterday.→The committee approved the plan yesterday.

3，形容词专有名词形两组相连:转换第一个形容词专有名词形为形容词，保存第二个或将其转换成疑惑子句。

Their interpretation of the implementation of the institute’s program was insightful.→They insightfully interpreted how the institute implemented its program

First was their introduction of their analysis of dreams by the trauma patients.→First,they introduced how they analyzed the trauma patients’dreams.

4，当主关键词中的形容词专有名词形与谓词的形容词专有名词形时:将2个形容词专有名词形转为形容词，考虑二者的关联并再加上有效的连词(because,when,if,although,even though,despite,etc.)。

Her understanding of the situation was evidenced by the quitting of her job.→She understood the situation…she quit her job→When she quit her job,she showed she understood the situation.